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In April 2013 I wrote a poem called 'The Third Bench'. The poem described a short but very painful walk I took to a bench on a cliff path near my house. For some it was not easy reading. Two years on and I've been at it again...
This time I have had a year of intensive training, a new approach to pain management (called; avoid doctors and drugs at all costs.) and a huge lump of determination. When I got back I was in agony, the pain has not changed..... but my attitude, well perhaps you should read the poem; I hope you enjoy it.
Benches Galore
I’ve been working out hard
in a pool and the gym.
Has it been worth it -
the effort put in?
A jog on the cliff path
I’d best take a phone,
‘coz if I break down
I’ll be miles from home.
Last time I tried this;
I made the ‘Third Bench’
but things got real ugly,
and I cried like a wench.
I start out slowly
my sticks left at home;
I will need them later
it hurts to the bone.
I grit my teeth
ignore the pain.
Think; ‘I am the master,’
time and again.
I manage the steps,
a bit clumsy, it’s true
they’re steep and uneven
there’s more than a few.
I pass couples, families,
walkers with dogs,
we hop to the sides
a little like frogs.
Then I steam past it,
I pass the ‘Third Bench’
but this time;
this time, my heart gives a clench.
‘coz I’m on the way back
with a leg that’s real sore
and I’ve hardly a care;
I’ve passed benches GALORE.
15 February 2015
John Carré Buchanan
Well done, John!
ReplyDeleteThank you Richard, your support is much appreciated.
DeleteWhat a difference 2 years makes - not just in your physical achievement, but in the tone of your poem. The last one was all grim determination and endurance - this one sounds like hope!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Hovis, I guess you are right. At the time I wrote the 2013 poem I thought it was quite hopeful, I suppose my perspectives have also changed quite a bit.
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