tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post1966053809968011221..comments2023-08-20T16:29:20.381+01:00Comments on Poet at Jaybern: The TwitcherJohn Buchananhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-65267484325438577552017-09-04T15:19:18.825+01:002017-09-04T15:19:18.825+01:00Hi Sarah, thank you, I am beginning to feel like t...Hi Sarah, thank you, I am beginning to feel like the audio is a bit of a hit.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-37257866947080757942017-09-04T14:41:31.410+01:002017-09-04T14:41:31.410+01:00Love the poem, but your audio really brought it ho...Love the poem, but your audio really brought it home. Well done!Sarah Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06548593069470592148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-84747897988769078032017-09-04T07:38:28.349+01:002017-09-04T07:38:28.349+01:00Hi Rosemary, I am glad my poem conveyed the imager...Hi Rosemary, I am glad my poem conveyed the imagery so well. Thanks for your kind comment.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-9814976295702641902017-09-04T07:18:56.074+01:002017-09-04T07:18:56.074+01:00You had me picturing it vividlyl.You had me picturing it vividlyl.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-28457628703440394072017-09-04T06:16:33.825+01:002017-09-04T06:16:33.825+01:00Thank you Ayala, I am glad you liked the poem.Thank you Ayala, I am glad you liked the poem.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-10131412339394621452017-09-04T06:15:50.029+01:002017-09-04T06:15:50.029+01:00Hi Indybev, Thank you for commenting on the audio,...Hi Indybev, Thank you for commenting on the audio, I am considering doing more Readings and getting positive feedback is great.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-82922760789359186432017-09-04T06:13:58.391+01:002017-09-04T06:13:58.391+01:00Thanks for your comment Martin, I am glad you enjo...Thanks for your comment Martin, I am glad you enjoyed the poem and that it conveyed excitement.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-80770562991856754322017-09-04T06:12:22.354+01:002017-09-04T06:12:22.354+01:00Prohibit Toni, thank you for your comment, A lot o...Prohibit Toni, thank you for your comment, A lot of military aircraft are actually named after raptors, Falcon, Hawk, Harrier etc. I'm glad you liked the poem.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-33963006929538675432017-09-04T01:31:52.682+01:002017-09-04T01:31:52.682+01:00Nicely done.Nicely done.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-30675103077854915212017-09-04T01:18:03.181+01:002017-09-04T01:18:03.181+01:00I very much enjoyed listening to the poem. (Like ...I very much enjoyed listening to the poem. (Like others, I found the explanation helpful).indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-78939878859294362672017-09-04T01:14:54.492+01:002017-09-04T01:14:54.492+01:00Wow! I found this enjoyable and excitingWow! I found this enjoyable and excitingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-70773246181114373022017-09-04T00:58:38.416+01:002017-09-04T00:58:38.416+01:00I am thankful of the explanation. The "birds...I am thankful of the explanation. The "birds" descending...I truly love raptors and even though you were speaking of planes, my brain stuck on raptors. A very interesting and powerful read.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-87866405297055402432017-09-03T18:06:02.483+01:002017-09-03T18:06:02.483+01:00Thank you Sanaa, I'm glad you found the explan...Thank you Sanaa, I'm glad you found the explanation helpful. John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-62249732535711882112017-09-03T17:57:08.297+01:002017-09-03T17:57:08.297+01:00This is so haunting! I like that you provided us w...This is so haunting! I like that you provided us with an explanation :) Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-61468064550764239662017-09-03T17:44:44.310+01:002017-09-03T17:44:44.310+01:00Thank you, you are right but the adrenaline is flo...Thank you, you are right but the adrenaline is flowing! Thanks for the comment on the reading, I've been experimenting with the audio and hoping people like it. Being disabled myself, I am trying to open things up to a slightly wider audience.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-13847737094081113202017-09-03T17:33:46.780+01:002017-09-03T17:33:46.780+01:00What a chilling place to be after the birds of pre...What a chilling place to be after the birds of prey has left... liked the reading a lot.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-77259092707514386182017-09-03T16:32:30.768+01:002017-09-03T16:32:30.768+01:00Thank you Sherry, I'm glad the combined poem a...Thank you Sherry, I'm glad the combined poem and introduction got the message across.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-41483280996489740692017-09-03T16:30:42.441+01:002017-09-03T16:30:42.441+01:00Thank you Gillena. I hope you have a good Sunday t...Thank you Gillena. I hope you have a good Sunday too.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-52268850566303646742017-09-03T16:21:47.349+01:002017-09-03T16:21:47.349+01:00Wow, thanks for the explanation of this poem. I ca...Wow, thanks for the explanation of this poem. I can see the man, exposed, on the ground as the great "birds" roared over.............I can see him, breaking into a "tab"......lickety split.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-9749951712552627512017-09-03T16:12:01.573+01:002017-09-03T16:12:01.573+01:00What excitement added to danger, a good equation f...What excitement added to danger, a good equation for this poem, well done<br />Happy Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-25322218122677489392017-09-03T14:17:47.912+01:002017-09-03T14:17:47.912+01:00I guess it was only frightening when things went w...I guess it was only frightening when things went wrong but it was always challenging. Thanks for your comment.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-501143858394418832017-09-03T14:13:47.218+01:002017-09-03T14:13:47.218+01:00Glad that you wrote the explanatory words as well....Glad that you wrote the explanatory words as well... What a frightening situation with these 'birds,' but what an important job!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-77403854023838561722017-09-03T13:41:28.843+01:002017-09-03T13:41:28.843+01:00Hi Jae Rose, Thank you for your kind comment.Hi Jae Rose, Thank you for your kind comment.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-72547751811461034832017-09-03T13:13:28.681+01:002017-09-03T13:13:28.681+01:00Nicely done I could picture the bird well Nicely done I could picture the bird well Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-883131172123152234.post-87722637834730971932017-09-03T12:45:40.277+01:002017-09-03T12:45:40.277+01:00Yes, a very dangerous job especially when you work...Yes, a very dangerous job especially when you work as a 2 man team. Thanks for your comment.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.com